NaNoWriMo 2016

Ah! November! It’s almost here! Turkey! Dressing! Pie! Family Gatherings! And NaNoWriMo!

I’m excited about National Novel Writing Month. I’ve chosen which novel I will write. (I wrote out three ideas from which I could choose). I’m scrambling to finish the outline in time for the start of writing on November 01. At the same time, I’m doubtful I’ll be able to punch out 50,000 words on my keyboard. But there’s a reason why I’m contemplating a NaNoWriMo loss before it even begins: I’m doing NaNoWriMo differently this year.

Yesterday, I spent most of the day at Mount Vernon Jr. High School, pitching NaNoWriMo to every student in the school alongside Marissa Priddis, Director of the local Alexandrian Library. (She’s fabulous, by the way). It was awesome to see the enthusiasm of the students during and after our introduction of the program. Students came up to me after each pitch to tell me what they planned to write about. I even had a few approach me after school while I waited on the sidewalk to pick my daughter up. I’m hopeful that we’ll have a large group of young writers participating.

Now, the teachers are busy planning after-school write-ins, write-ins at the Alexandrian Library, write-ins at the riverfront, and maybe a few other places.


Riverside Park, Mount Vernon, Indiana


I’ll be at as many write-ins for the students as I can attend but my purpose there will be to mentor and assist, not write. I’m in it for a win but, honestly, I’m more excited about what these young authors are going to write than my word count on November 30. I won NaNoWriMo last year with my Sci-Fi novel Rifted. This year, my focus will be on helping others win.

My personal writing project is book 4 of my fantasy series. My daughter read the first three and has demanded the next one.

NaNoWriMo, bring it on!


The Business Side

I love to write. There are, in fact, few things I would rather do than write.  At the same time, my goal for writing is to get published. Yes, I could probably write stories for the rest of my life and be happy, but I’ve discovered the joy of sharing my stories with others. That’s important to me, too.

A few weeks ago, my eleven-year-old daughter grabbed the editing copy of my latest novel, The Sign of Psyche, when I wasn’t looking. She started reading and wouldn’t give it back. Within three days, she had devoured all 86,800 words. I think she was a little surprised she liked it.


The next week, she read three books of my YA fantasy series. She blasted through 320,000 words in seven days. As the author of those books, it felt like the best kind of validation. This kid is a reader who set the school record for Accelerated Reading points (641.6!) in 5th grade.

I had planned to participate in NaNoWriMo this November. Now, however, I think I’ll focus on the other side of writing: the business side. I have five complete novels sitting on my computer. They’re revised and ready to query. Writing a sixth while the others sit won’t help me get published.

As much as I love to write, I also want to share my stories. That means I need to get down to business. It means researching literary agents and writing query letters. It feels a little less exciting than crafting new stories, but it could lead to the most exciting thing of all: representation and eventual publication.

I have six queries out at the moment. So I’ll cross my fingers and hope some of those agents shows interest in my query. In the meantime, I’ll research a few more and get ready for another round.


Satisfaction and Sorrow

A deep sense of satisfaction comes with finishing a novel. Yet, tempering that euphoria, a sense of sorrow demands to be felt as well. I oscillate between this: “I’m done! Holy smokes, I’m done!” and this: “Crumbs. I’m going to miss this character. I can’t believe I’m done.”

It actually makes the conclusion of a story hard for me to write. I simply don’t want this character out of my head. I don’t want to say goodbye. I don’t want the time I’ve spent with this now-intimate friend to be over.

Today, I finished my YA Historical Fantasy, The Sign of Psyche. It clocks in at 85,500 words. For now, I have to say goodbye to Eupeithis and Orthios. The good news is, I’ll be back to check on them soon. A revision must happen. Revision is a kind of reunion. But for now, my friends have left me in a state of melancholy joy.

I think I’ll go read a good book.


A Million Words

I know, I know, it’s been a long time since my last post. But things have been busy! Sheesh! You’d think life would slow down in the summer. Clearly not.

Before summer set in I was reading a book by Paula Munier called Writing With Quiet Hands. I’ve enjoyed the read. One of the things that stuck out to me was when she mentions that someone she respected in the writing industry once told her that it takes about a million words written in order to make a writer good. A MILLION words! That’s a lot!

So me being me, I started adding up my written words over the course of my 2 1/2 years of serious writing. With my current 6 completed drafts (4 novels, 1 picture book, 1 confirmation manual) my numbers are right at half a million words. All of these works have been through multiple hack-and-slash revisions, so the actual number of words written is higher. I tend to write a 110,000 word novel, cut 30k-40k words, and write another 20k-30k words in the revision. So yeah, it’s a lot of words. But even including the revision work in the final number wouldn’t get me to a million words written.

I also write a lot of story as a major part of my work as a pastor. Sermons are stories reinterpreted in ways that relate to people and our world. I connect my story and people’s stories to the stories of the Scriptures. In fact, my fiction writing – especially learning about the craft of writing – has helped my preaching. With roughly 425 sermons written at a conservative average of 1,800 words each, that’s in the neighborhood of 765,000 words written.

So, Yay! I’ve clearly passed the million word mark. Does that mean I’m a good writer now? I think not. It’s not quite that automatic.

My goal of becoming a good writer has taken intentional effort on my part. I’ve put a lot of hard work into it and sought to learn whatever I could about craft, style, voice, plot, character, tension, world-building, etc. The thing is, becoming a good writer is still a goal, not something I’ve necessarily achieved by hitting a certain word count (and that’s what I think Paula Munier was getting at in her book). Like anything else, it’s a process of continued growth that, so long as I am still breathing, is never truly complete.

Toward the middle of May, I had a new story idea that wouldn’t go away. I wrote an outline and some potential scene ideas. I told my wife about the idea, and she got excited. I wrote chapter 1 and sent the first few paragraphs to my critique group for feedback. I made revisions of the chapter, completed the full outline, and set it aside.

I had something else I wanted to do first. Before writing my new novel, I intended to go back to those older stories and rewrite them using the tools I have learned since writing them. I got busy with outlines and brainstorming. I started the rewrite of my first novel. But something about the new story wouldn’t leave me alone. I needed to write this one first.

So, in mid-June, I put everything else aside. I sat down and started writing The Sign of Psyche. The thing is, while I recognize my other books really aren’t written well, I don’t have the same thoughts about this one. I think it probably is actually good. The writing is of a higher quality than anything else I’ve written. (But I’m only cautiously optimistic because I have thought similar things before).

My earlier novels were written more or less in a fly-by-the-seat-of-my-pants manner. Since then, I have learned the value of an outline. And I have learned that every scene must matter. I wrote out a very full outline for The Sign of Psyche, which makes writing easier. Due to the outline, I’m less concerned about what to write, which allows me to focus entirely on how to write it.

When I look at the drafts of my four completed novels, I have to chuckle at the fact that I thought they were amazing when I finished them – even after revising them fifty times! I still think the ideas for those stories are great concepts. But it will take complete rewrites to rescue those concepts from the cage of bad writing in which they’re currently imprisoned.

My million-plus words written hasn’t automatically made me a good writer. But the pursuit of excellence over the course of those million or more words has given me the tools to write well, and the will to keep working at it every day.


Revision = Perseverance

I’ve spent the last month revising my Sci-Fi book Rifted. My last draft was 114,400 words, but I’ve whittled it down to 99,962. I chopped 14,438 words from this thing. I killed off a lot of scenes that I liked, but they had to go. I dumped a whole chapter. I fixed dialogue and cut tags. I murdered widows (those single words dangling on their own line at the end  of a paragraph).

Yep. I killed lots of widows by rewriting or cutting sentences.

Overall, I cleaned this manuscript up a lot. I’m happy about it, and I feel satisfied with the result. I think it’s probably ready to shop, but I’ve thought that before. So I’m going to give myself some time. I’ll sit on it, reread it, and re-evaluate. But later.

Right now, I’m going to enjoy the sense of satisfied euphoria at accomplishing what I feared was an impossible task when I began. I knew I needed to get the word count below 100,000, but I didn’t believe I could possibly cut that many words.

Still, I buckled down and did the hard work of revision. And I proved that I could. Self-doubt is the most debilitating kind, and I proved mine wrong.


SCBWI Wild, Wild, Midwest Conference

Hi Everyone!

I got to spend an amazing weekend in Naperville, IL at the Society of Children’s Books Writers and Illustrators Midwest Region’s Wild, Wild, Midwest conference. I got to see my Noodle Friends (minus Victor who writes for adults, so not a member of SCBWI, but I’ll see him in July at the Midwest Writers Workshop). It was so great to be with them again.

On a really cool note, the 500 or so authors and illustrators present at the Wild, Wild, Midwest conference donated something like $3,815.00 for We Need Diverse Books. We raised enough to support a Walter Dean Myers grant plus some mentoring to writers, which is totally awesome! Our conference has challenged other SCBWI conferences to beat us in giving.

All in all, I have come away from this conference inspired and reinvigorated about my writing. I think some big takeaways for me were the lessons on craft. That’s really what I hoped to learn.

But I also feel a lot more patient about things. I want to make my stories the best I possibly can because I believe the stories are worth it. I think I had grown impatient about publishing over the past year, and now I’m not worried about it. I need to get the story right. I write because I love to write, not because I need to get published. So I’ll breathe, drink my coffee, and write.

One of the grander realizations I had is my need to split my first novel, The Lesser Betrayal, into two books. I think I’m trying to accomplish way too much in a single book, and it really does feel like two separate story arcs that I’ve essentially forced together. I’ve thought about this for a while, but (honestly) I didn’t want to do the work to make it two books. I thought I could live with it as is. But now, I know differently.

As a way to examine this, I wrote query letters for each of the books. Query letters can act as a guide for the story before it’s written. A query answers four important questions:

(1) Who is the main character?

(2) What does she want?

(3) Who/What is blocking her?

(4) What does she sacrifice?

These are all essential parts of story, which is how your character struggles to overcome conflict in order to achieve (or fail to achieve) her want or need. So, writing a query letter BEFORE you write your manuscript can help you sort through the mess of ideas in your brain about your story and help you focus on what’s important for your story.

Here’s the query draft for what will be Book 1. Possible title: For The Order (still cogitating on that one).

Long ago, Ashura’s ancestors were betrayed and cursed with mortality. Now, Tellia is a world divided between mortals and immortals. But divisions among the mortals also run deep.

Like all women in the Queendom of Hoqra, Ashura has trained since childhood to be a warrior. She will protect her home from the kingdoms that want to destroy the only land where women rule. After another invasion full of devastating loss, Ashura’s one desire is to protect her family.

But Ashura is torn away from her family when she is claimed by the powerful Order of Shifqu and forced to leave Hoqra. Ashura hates the master who claimed her, even as he teaches her another way to meet her goals. If she can help the Order regain her people’s immortality, she’ll do more than protect her family: she’ll save them from death.

But her master reveals that the Order has lost sight of its true purpose, and he believes only Ashura’s talent can put it back on the path to saving their people. But many of the Order’s members are men from the kingdom that killed her sister. To save her family, Ashura must sacrifice her identity as a warrior of Hoqra and embrace her place in the Order of Shifqu alongside those she hates.

This is the query draft for Book 2, what will become the new The Lesser Betrayal.

Long ago, Ashura’s ancestors were betrayed and cursed with mortality. Now, Tellia is a world divided between mortals and immortals. But divisions among the mortals also run deep.

After successfully moving the Order of Shifqu on a path to unite the Children of Daedin, Ashura is given a mission that no member of the Order has ever accomplished. Following the Order’s tradition for those voted Arc-assassin, Ashura is sent to kill the latest-born princess of the Elder Line.

But when Ashura reaches the enemy lands, she can’t reconcile what she sees of the Children of Ainariel with what she has been told about them. She wrestles with killing an enemy who doesn’t seem evil. But killing the princess is the only way she can return home.

When Ashura is captured while attacking the princess, she expects execution. Instead, she is shown kindness and care. Her definition of what makes an enemy is further challenged when she discovers a long-lost hero living among the people her Order wants to destroy.

Now, Ashura must choose between her family and her heart. One must be sacrificed to keep the other. When every choice she has is treachery, Ashura must choose the lesser betrayal.

I think two books simply works better than one. I won’t have to span huge amounts of time with little recaps of what happened. Instead, I can just tell the story. And that feels like a relief.

Anyway, I wanted to share how I’m re-imagining this stuff. It feels exciting and intimidating, but it should be so much fun to do! I can’t wait to get writing.

Comments welcome, as always.

Keep writing and keep reading!